帮公司设计的邀请函，大家看看拿的出手吗？？？？？

nagoo

<img width="500" height="353" src="http://photo6.yupoo.com/20070722/152644_87159703.jpg" border="0" alt="" /><br /><br /><img width="500" height="353" src="http://photo6.yupoo.com/20070722/152638_696336191.jpg" border="0" alt="" /><br /><br /><br /><br /><font size="4"><font color="red">不足之处请点出！！！！！！</font></font>

nagoo

<br><br><div class="msgbody"><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">原帖由 <i>freeair</i> 于 2007-7-22 21:25 发表 <a href="http://www.im286.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=20677394&amp;ptid=2079773" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.im286.com/images/common/back.gif" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt='Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor='hand'; this.alt='Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open('http://www.im286.com/images/common/back.gif');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /></a><br />四周留边太少，第一面还是又点空！大气点做的！ </div></div><br>谢谢。。。&nbsp;&nbsp;还会再改进的！

freeair

四周留边太少，第一面还是又点空！大气点做的！

nagoo

<br><br><div class="msgbody"><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">原帖由 <i>蜗牛</i> 于 2007-7-22 16:44 发表 <a href="http://www.im286.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=20672022&amp;ptid=2079773" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.im286.com/images/common/back.gif" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt='Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor='hand'; this.alt='Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open('http://www.im286.com/images/common/back.gif');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /></a><br />我的第一感觉是像那些毕业证书....<br /><br />没有把邀请的那种感觉做出来...<br /><br />这种东东尽可能做得简约,大气...... </div></div><br>如果是全权要自己做的话，肯定不会加那么多字的。&nbsp;&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;&nbsp;明天跟老板商量一下，看看字数是不是可以减一些。。。。&nbsp; &nbsp; 现在整体的版面已经确定了，也只能排排版面！

蜗牛

我的第一感觉是像那些毕业证书....<br /><br />没有把邀请的那种感觉做出来...<br /><br />这种东东尽可能做得简约,大气......

zih

字要在大点,太小是不会看的.<img src="images/smilies/lol.gif" smilieid="9" border="0" alt="" />

nagoo

<br><br><div class="msgbody"><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">原帖由 <i>9527</i> 于 2007-7-22 16:30 发表 <a href="http://www.im286.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=20671810&amp;ptid=2079773" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.im286.com/images/common/back.gif" border="0" onload="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.alt='Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out';}" onmouseover="if(this.width>screen.width*0.7) {this.resized=true; this.width=screen.width*0.7; this.style.cursor='hand'; this.alt='Click here to open new window\nCTRL+Mouse wheel to zoom in/out';}" onclick="if(!this.resized) {return true;} else {window.open('http://www.im286.com/images/common/back.gif');}" onmousewheel="return imgzoom(this);" alt="" /></a><br />楼猪<br />是搞建筑预算的？ </div></div><br>公司是搞预算软件的。 并非我也是！<img src="images/smilies/lol.gif" smilieid="9" border="0" alt="" /> <img src="images/smilies/lol.gif" smilieid="9" border="0" alt="" /> <img src="images/smilies/lol.gif" smilieid="9" border="0" alt="" />

9527

楼猪<br />是搞建筑预算的？

sunshow

不是说要你删内容.是你的布局太满了.你要做的大气一点.让整个版面空间感更好的方法.就是把一些字缩小.四个边和文字的距离太近. 大部分文字都需要缩小. 手表和圆圈可以适当改变.如圆圈,可以变成鹅型并向前倾斜.在变形后的上下各加2条弧线等.还有圆圈下面的文字一定要对齐.<br />发布的日期什么的也需要变成9PX左右.白色背景+红色背景非常衬托手表.需要揣摩下吧.你毕竟主要不是去发手表的.

cqfanli

很好啊